Tuesday, August 10, 2010

Descriptive Writing - Cow




The Astronauts Writing Group has been trying to come up with alliteration sentences for a cow. Here are some of their ideas.

A slow stubborn cow.
The cow has a big black back.
By A.H

A fast four-legged cow.
A stubborn spotted cow.
By R.HR

This cow has a swish-swoshing tail.
The cow has wobble, wiggly legs.
By J.MC

A small smelly spotted cow.
The cow has big brown eyes.
By B.H

A fast fat cow.
This cow has hard heavy horns.
By C.A

The Comets have been writing sentences that contain adjectives (describing words). Here are some of their ideas.

This cow has sharp horns. It is a black and white cow. This cow has a brown bell.
By M.A

Is it a black and white cow that has a fast waging tail.
By A.J

Is his tail long and white? Is that bell very loud? Is his ears big?
By M.B

Squish, squash went Milker, the big slow cow.
By J.G

Her long skinny tail is waving all around.
By H.C